I have to say that he lost me in the beginning when I really couldn't keep track ast to who was saying what. I am a person who really likes to have everything clarified. If I feel confused or left out in the beginning I am pretty much done with the piece. I also had no idea why these two guys were ordering everyone around and everyone was obeying until near the end when Hemingway mentions that the guy that was in the kitchen was carrying a shot gun. I think that had he mentioned that early in the story then I would have not been so frustrated with the characters.
I don't mean to be so negative but this piece was almost as bad as the "Old Man and the Sea". Where that story bored me this story did not connect the characters to me. Not my favorite story.
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